I am a year 8 student at Glen innes school. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Mrs Ramkolowan

Thursday 10 March 2016

Man Vs Wild

Saturday at dawn, David went for a boat ride in the ocean. David has short black curly hair,  hazel eyes,  a beard, is tall and  loves to  explore the ocean. So he got his gear and loaded his boat for his adventure. Hooked it up to his car and drove to the ramp.

David was ready and set to go on his adventure. He smelt the salty fresh air and heard the seagulls. He was out in the ocean and he enjoyed the hot summer breeze. Everything was going dandy until he saw something fast went along side the boat. David didn't worry until the boat started to rock like an earthquake. The boat stopped and then “RRRIIIIPP” the crocodile demolished the motor. The crocodile got into the boat but David used his rope and tied the crocodile up. Went back to shore, everyone was shocked with what he came back with. But he told everybody the real story of how the crocodile got tied up.

Few days later……
David made it to the news paper,news and radio he was so popular his nickname was Man Vs Wild. But after what happened in the boat and he died. David doesn’t want to go back out to sea again.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Sulat Alyssa
I like how you wrote so much powerful words. You put a nice title for your story I like it. Man vs Wild. Would you write another story similar to Man vs Wild?

Unknown said...

Sulat Alyssa
I like how you wrote so much powerful words. You put a nice title for your story I like it. Man vs Wild. Would you write another story similar to Man vs Wild?

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