I am a year 8 student at Glen innes school. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Mrs Ramkolowan

Saturday 16 April 2016

Ice-cream sandwich

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It was freshly cold from the freezer. A small rectangle with two crunchy squares squishing between them are hard bits of delicious chunks of inviting chocolate. As it reaches your mouth you can feel the cold air on your lips, take one bite and your mouth will be melting like a milkshake in your mouth. You’ll be wanting seconds.

1 comments:

Unknown said...

Kia Ora Alyssa,

I like your descriptions on your Ice-cream sandwich, especially how you described the ice-cream like a milkshake melting in your mouth. I thought that was cool. I had an ice-cream sandwich and I enjoyed did you?

Keep it up!

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